Zoom to Find Your Fingerprint Story

Over the years, I have been asked hundreds of times what a student can do in order to write a compelling and unique personal statement about a popular or common activity. On the one hand we tell kids to be themselves and write about the things they value most and on the other hand we tell them not to follow the crowd and work hard to craft essays that are the first of their kind! 😉

No matter how popular or common your activity or experience may appear to be on the surface, never forget that the way you experienced it is like a fingerprint. No two experiences are alike.

Take the time to peruse through your memories of the many wonderful, challenging, disappointing or all of the above moments that you lived with this activity (let’s say it is soccer). This may seem overwhelming but being thorough will really help you find the perfect story and you may find it to be quite enjoyable as well.

Once you believe you have catalogued your soccer journey, you will need to decide how close you want to zoom in or out of the topic. When I say zoom in or out try and imagine a time when you went to Google Maps to search or the helicopter view of your house. If you carefully decide how close or far you want to set your zoom position for the map, you will see your house, the car in the driveway and maybe even smaller details like the trees or bushes or your dad mowing the lawn! If you zoom in too close you will simply see a pixelated screen. If you zoom all the way out you will see all of Planet Earth.

Taking this analogy and applying it to a popular activity like soccer, if you zoomed all the way out you could probably recount your entire soccer journey since your parents first signed you up all the way through to yesterday’s Varsity Team practice. Since maximum word counts are fixed (650 for the Common App Personal Statement), the more you zoom out, the less details you can offer and the less you can dive in deeper or reflect – this means we will learn less about YOU! Zooming all the way in could be compared to describing your favorite soccer ball or cleats like an Amazon product page. In this case 650 words is way too much and there is nothing deep to dive into. Adjusting your zoom intelligently and keeping in mind that the point of this essay is to help the admissions reps learn more about who you are, maybe you focus on the journey towards learning how to perform a bicycle kick or possibly a conversation with a coach that led you to better understand yourself and thus how to improve as a soccer athlete. Conversations (or moments) are great because they serve as anecdotes that do not consume tons of words yet they offer the possibility to dive in and really share a unique fingerprint story with soccer in the background. The story doesn’t even have to be explicitly tied to playing or training for soccer.

In the end, writing a personal statement about a common activity like soccer comes down to authenticity and perspective. It’s not about finding the rarest topic, but about digging deep into your own experiences and sharing the fingerprint moments that have shaped you. Whether it’s learning a challenging skill or technique, a pivotal conversation, or a small but meaningful victory, those moments—and how they affected you and how you reflect on them—offer insight into who you are beyond the surface of the activity. By thoughtfully adjusting your focus and sharing your unique “fingerprint” story, you’ll establish a powerful and profound connection with your reader and reveal the personal journey that sets you apart.

This article was written by Insight’s Co-Founder, Ajit Jain.